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Season's Jubilee ---- 2 versions

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Sun amply leaves its autographs,
As gently bows the sea,
On skins of beach-fan audience
For season's jubilee.

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Sun amply leaves its autographs,
After duets with sea,
On skins of beach-fan audience
For season's jubilee.
Which is better?
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Summer Sun lays, on those on the beach
who protection happen to lack
meaningful and with a winning smile
a passionate hand on the back

perhaps unwanted and too much
this smoldering touch from above
but for days to come, when you feel it: you smile
remembering Summer Sun's love